If someone do not show off for two years, people will eventually forget that person. The present, director of military affairs does not allow military service exception for BTS. BBC criticized Korea's standard of military service exception. It is because BTS helps in solving the problem in equality for classic musician and public culture musician. If the Military Manpower Administration does not make new standard for idol groups like BTS, It will decrease the country's economy.
South Korea is in danger of losing enormous economic vitality and tourists. It is because BTS will enter the army, soon. If this situation continues, the country will experience unstable economic conditions and loss of many tourists. To solve this problem, Military Manpower Administration should make a new standard and exclude BTS in taking the military service.
Currently, BTS' achievements and influences are amazing. BTS' concerts were all sold out immediately in different countries such as Japan, USA, UK, France, and Saudi Arabia. Also, according to The Times, BTS is one of the top 25 most influential people in the world. In this process, according to the South economic laboratory, BTS' economic vitality is over 55 billion and the increasing of tourists are 79.8 million. However, if BTS enters the army, the country's economic conditions and tourists will decrease.
For these reasons, we must stop BTS in entering the army. To solve this situation, Military Manpower Administration should make a new standard. If this happens, South Korea's economic growth and tourists will increase.
If BTS is no exempted in military service, South Korea will suffer from economic depression. To solve this problem, Military Manpower Administration should make a new standard for the military service exception.
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